asylum the wickid said:

i'm only toppling over your lines cause your flow was so weak//
you once showed signs of greatness now you're outcome is bleak//
that weak flow has blown your armor,now you're prone to attack//
how are you gonna end my career when you're flat on your back?//

attention and submission dont rhyme,please learn how to read//
your fucking rhymes are propaganda,they were made to mis-led//
what you're afraid to mention is that i'm sick with the flow//
you're just a peasent and i'm the king but that we already know//

and one,two,three,four.congrats,you just learned how to count//
one and two for you and three and four for me in this bout//
cause your wack rhymes made you trip up from begining to start//
like the ones about you winning this and the old drunk fart//

this here is no Mortal Kombat because i'm out of this world//
and you're just some prepubescent twelve year old little girl//
you are no bomb threat cause you have just been defused//
thanks for posting your bars,i think we've all been amused//

VOTE NOW PEOPLE

actually, submission n attention do rhyme not a strong rhyme but they do, in the “shun” part

but since your playing it like that, i thought id let you know that read and mis-led dont rhyme unless ur tryna say  read like red then it rhymes with mis-led but then it wouldnt really make sense “learn how to red'' ? lmao…get it?

and..count + bout = failure to rhyme

soooo in a sense, your 1st line of your 2nd set, fails causing a sorta crumble with the rest lol.

proof-reading really helps BUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUDY lol

now people, vote

can you vote?

Oh Shadow you forgot he rhymed world with girl according to spadez that wouldn't rhyme. Actually according to me that don't rhyme…

asylum the wickid said:

Took him so long to post up like a whole day//

At least my sponser's not like Slant so I get paid//

One your an immature hatchet wearing wannabe rap star//

Two I've seen better raps from a drunken old fart//

Three your working on a verse over and over again just to try to beat me//

Four one punchline from me is gonna knock the socks right off your feet//

Head to head I'mma win this mortal combat//

Clashing against me is like starting a bomb threat//

how do those lines rhyme? lol so 2 of my lines dont rhyme,did you not see the battle i did with flash and how i didnt rhyme 2 lines just to make fun of him.and why do you hate me so much? lol i dont even fucking know you or said anything about you and you hate me,wow is my ego that bad around here that people hate me when i never knew or talked about em

u missed some parts, “whole day” went with spray and w.e else was before it

Nothing pleases him but nothing makes him go away//

After I'm through with you you'll become a stray//

Took him so long to post up like a whole day//

bomb threat

Clashing against me is like starting a bomb threat//

I'm gonna explode soon because my bomb's set//

So many pieces of spadez nobody would want to collect//

so yes, his did rhyme, the line before “bomb threat” didnt rhyme but it didnt have to, it was jus a “liner” to sort of speak…im just doing this to clarify it to u spadez, cuz in comparison to yours, yours was off lol

anyways id rather not cast my vote…ill hold out until a final vote is needed….

soooo VOTING IS OPEN, please vote, here is premade template

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Mock-C:

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lazy people need to vote…. I already know I won but still shadow even gave you a template to copy and paste….