Advertise on Shadowville
You must be logged in to post
 
Search Forums:


 




TankScraper vs oreocookie

UserPost

11:53 am
March 28, 2008


tankscraper

Journeyman

Posts: 84

1

This
is the representative who’s attentive/

making
damn well sure i listen like an anal retentive/

because
whoever got the data is the winner of the match/

and
this emcee I’m facing won’t even inflict a scratch/

However,
I choose not to underestimate my opponents/

So
I bring out my mechanical lines, with upgraded components/

I
respect and take life, like an ancient medieval warrior/

My
blades invade ya faster than a trans-Atlantic courier/

So
stick up ya hands if your feeble mind understands/

You’re
not part of the plan and your defenses are poorly manned/

My
tactical strike would be beyond your comprehension/

The
aftermath would send your family into sombre tension/

Gravestone
states lonely man who’s last breath was a death rattle/

Caused
by the frustration of intimidation in the battle/

Your
luck is running out fast, even faster the more we go/

Cause
I’ll rip you in half and eat your insides like an OREO/


advertisements

12:04 pm
March 28, 2008


oreocookie

Initiate

Posts: 46

2

ill hit u up with my first  verse shortly.

12:40 pm
March 28, 2008


tankscraper

Journeyman

Posts: 84

3

Man i couldn’t get the format to work.  How do I organize the page so it isn’t all chopped up like that?  It looks like I’m Shatner rappin.

11:05 pm
March 28, 2008


tankscraper

Journeyman

Posts: 84

4

Ok, sorry I’m the new guy but White Rhino has finally posted his s**t and we’re gonna do that first.  I didn’t realize the 1 battle at a time thing, my bad.  Admin, can we just wait and finish it after the other one’s over?

 

9:35 pm
April 4, 2008


oreocookie

Initiate

Posts: 46

5

hey man its kewl i understand if u didnt know. but ur battle with rhino is over so u wanna finish now?

3:12 pm
April 5, 2008


tankscraper

Journeyman

Posts: 84

6

most definitely. i got hosed on the votes son, rhino’s multis dont even make SENSE.

just kidding, hes a friend and ILL GET HIM NEXT TIME, GADGET

oreo, drop your lines if you want, as long as its cool for me to keep my first post I’m ready.  i gotta make up for that close ass loss, so come … uhh, correct

9:05 pm
April 5, 2008


oreocookie

Initiate

Posts: 46

7

 

 aint much wrote it in about 10 minutes or so. really tired. Good luck tank

 

-I won’t even inflict a scratch? Bitch I’ll cut u in peices/

-hit u so hard u could be agnostic cryin for Jesus/

-My luck aint runnin out, i gotta horseshoe and a 3 leaf clover/

-Ur gonna feel the pain i inflict until your life is over/

-Why do i even have to spit 16 lines, cuz u getcha gay ass raps from nursery rhymes/

-I aint intimidated by some b*tch named Tankscraper, Ur nothin to me like a wet peice O’ Paper/

-U throw down the stupid s**t like ur f**ked up on acid/

-so be seen and not heard like i dumped u in lake placid/

-My Gravestone doesn’t state s**t cuz im still breathin/

-in this battle loser walks, and im not leavin/

-In ur verse u use alot of repitition, sayin the same s**t in like every line/

-spittin the same stuff over and over, just to make it rhyme/

-U actually wanna proceed with this battle, i thought u were smarter than that/

-Cuz ur rhymes are like ya mama’s tits, no structure and flat/

-So write some real s**t and get off ya knees/

-Ya makin shadowville look bad, BITCH PLEASE!?/

 

9:21 pm
April 5, 2008


tankscraper

Journeyman

Posts: 84

8

seriously, if people think that was better than my rhyme, say so

and i will stop posting on this site so i can read for a year to understand the voting system 

10:18 am
April 6, 2008


oreocookie

Initiate

Posts: 46

9

dude its a battle. the whole point is to rag on the other person. so dont take it personal just post ya verse.

4:16 pm
April 6, 2008


tankscraper

Journeyman

Posts: 84

10

No offense meant or taken, oreo.  I just want to understand the voting, and how people on the site view hip-hop.  Because dude, your verse was good but the grammar and structure didn’t make much sense to me.  I’m just trying to get a handle on this site’s system, it’s all good bro.

Also, I will totally drop my verse if you do your second one. ABBA