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TankScraper vs oreocookie

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4:36 pm
April 6, 2008


white rhino

Adept

Posts: 156

Bloomington, Indiana

11

oreocookie said:

 

 

-My luck aint runnin out, i gotta horseshoe and a 3 leaf clover/


4 leaf clover probly woulda made more sense…. lol j/p

 

J, hit me up if your free today man

www.myspace.com/leebeckwith

6:59 pm
April 6, 2008


tankscraper

Journeyman

Posts: 84

12

Yeah I wasn’t even gonna say anything about that…thought maybe he meant it to be wrong or something lol. 

 

11:16 am
April 7, 2008


oreocookie

Initiate

Posts: 46

13

i meant to type in 4 leaf clover. i didnt notice it until i posted it… bummer

11:18 am
April 7, 2008


oreocookie

Initiate

Posts: 46

14

and im more of a verbal freestyle person. thats why its hard to really understand my structre when reading it. but if u heard it, it would be killer.

11:25 am
April 7, 2008


oreocookie

Initiate

Posts: 46

15

u never said ABBA.!? how about we just stick to ABAB

2:10 pm
April 7, 2008


tankscraper

Journeyman

Posts: 84

16

Dude, the rules of this site say ABBA, you have to tell me beforehand if you want different. But I gotcha lines, here goes


Insane strike like a velociraptor eating your dinner/

my brain’s got the mike, I’m your captor and the winner/

I’ll not resort to your means, and am cleaner as a result/

you got to report for duty, and I’m the leader of your cult/

You’re right if you say my rhymes had their first chance in nursery/

lines I wrote back then would sink yours, even if glancing cursory/

Please quote my repetitive lines, check your facts before you attack/

my rhymes got competitive variety that leaves you blue and black/

so don’t mind the clever ways I intertwine the screens and blinds/

you’ll never see through to the true meaning I hid between the lines/

Kneel before me or I’ll excommunicate your very soul/

then steal your life just to adjudicate the unnecessary goal/

Of winning in a battle I am saying you have rightfully lost/

and trying to play the scholar without paying the righteous cost/

you say I’m making Shadowville look bad,

when in fact I’ve just begun/

And I will battle still while you’re sad and broken, trust me son/

1:04 am
April 9, 2008


tankscraper

Journeyman

Posts: 84

17

no rush, dog.. you called the format so post ya s**t lets get this over with

11:29 am
April 9, 2008


oreocookie

Initiate

Posts: 46

18

my verse comin soon

12:13 pm
April 10, 2008


tankscraper

Journeyman

Posts: 84

19

3 days since I posted, and it’s already been a day since you said "soon", so your definition must be screwed up. Post ya verse dude, I wanna get into more battles!

12:32 pm
April 10, 2008


oreocookie

Initiate

Posts: 46

20

-My rhymes are authentic, urs are made of neoprene/

-Fuck wit me and ill behead like a guiallitine/

-I made a deal with a devil so im keepin my soul/

-Ive been to hell and back and my lines remain ice cold/

-U aint the leader of my cult i go solo, and i dont take no s**t from a homo/

-U wanna win? well people in hell want water, u battlin me’s like leading the lamb to the slaughter

-This aint even a fight, why u still write? cuz u cant spell "mike" right/

-In the whole shadowville vicinity, ur the only gay f**k that hasnt lost his virginity/

-Ya life is pitiful, ya words are critisizable, mine are irrisistable/

-this battle is almost over, u goin down, in the ground, im the Emcee now/

-ya style is wack, u smokin crack, my 5 year old sister can beat yo crap/

-just like my coke   ya rap is flat, how bout dat?, u cant rap/

-u like guys, am i takin ya pride, i dont matter how hard u try, u gonna be hated until u die/

 - dude, f**k u,my raps are ju-jutsu, urs are of a s**tsu/

-u gon die as a result, to a lightnin bolt jolt, im suprised u know the meaning of the word cult/

-in this battle ive been crowned, lucky for u this is the last round/

 

in line 10,11,12,13 put it to the eminem "superman" beat.