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TankScraper vs oreocookie

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1:24 pm
April 10, 2008


tankscraper

Journeyman

Posts: 84

21

Huh… he criticises my spelling, then puts "irrisistable" and "ju-jutsu" down, even as he rhymes it with "s**tsu". Even in the first line guillotine is misspelled, even though that first rhyme was my favorite. Neoprene is a dank word.

Cool lets get some votes up please pretty please!

8:23 pm
April 10, 2008


white rhino

Adept

Posts: 156

Bloomington, Indiana

22

tankscraper said:

you say I’m making Shadowville look bad,

when in fact I’ve just begun/

And I will battle still while you’re sad and broken, trust me son/



killin it, I really dug that last punch

www.myspace.com/leebeckwith

3:11 pm
April 12, 2008


tankscraper

Journeyman

Posts: 84

23

Cool, thanks Rhino

Can we get some votes up?  I promise to vote on battles as soon as I can. (as soon as I understand the voting system)  

6:53 pm
April 12, 2008


chill-ez

Journeyman

Posts: 64

24

hmm i int know whats this about do

making my defense immense with even less expence that you can spend………….

7:54 pm
April 12, 2008


tankscraper

Journeyman

Posts: 84

25

Man, you are speaking a different language, because I can’t understand what you mean. Are you dissing me? Or are you just clueless in general? Either vote or don’t, just don’t say nonsensical things.

PS Whatever that is after your post line, it better not be a "rhyme", because I just saw a big collection of words that didn’t create a meaning at all, except for "I don’t understand english." 

12:54 am
April 17, 2008


tankscraper

Journeyman

Posts: 84

26

I hate to post over and over, but when is this gonna be closed?

Because I’d like to do another battle, but noone will vote.  Whats up? 

10:09 am
April 17, 2008


Shadow

Posts: 5958

Somewhere near a bunch of beavers….

27

ok so…as for the whole spelling thing…i guess unless the battlers point it out in their verse n make fun of them like i did with my battle "theorogical" aint a word but peoples assumption was he meant theological which is a word..so spelling mistake…but anyway…if the voters can make out what the person is sayin n still make it flow etc then its alright…i guess…lol anyways  i didnt know this was still going, else i woulda voted LOL here u go

 

Tankscrapper:

multies - 3.5 

punches - 3.5

personals - 4

vocab - 3

structure - 3.5

(im giving u .5 extra even tho ur first one was a lil screwed up but..i took into consideration that its weird when u post here sometimes llol)

TOTAL: 17.5

 

Oreo

punches - 3

multies - 2

vocab - 3

personals - 3

structure - 2

i didnt like your structure because of those lil - you put there kinda annoys my eyes..LOL…i know weird..but its how it is…. 

TOTAL: 13

 

so my vote goes to Tank

nice battle fellas…lets get some more votes in people 

I don’t own Shadowville

10:25 am
April 17, 2008


tankscraper

Journeyman

Posts: 84

28

Thanks Shadow, yeah that format thing screwed me up because of the font i used lol.  And as for spelling, i dont usually care or dis on someone’s spelling AT ALL.  It matters not, except he went after me for it in his rhyme lol.

11:10 am
April 21, 2008


oreocookie

Initiate

Posts: 46

29

lets get some votes.

3:50 pm
April 21, 2008


tankscraper

Journeyman

Posts: 84

30

Oreo is correct, we need some votes pretty please.