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TankScraper vs oreocookie

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4:00 pm
April 21, 2008


Shadow

Posts: 5958

Somewhere near a bunch of beavers….

31

i think my friends sister will give birth before u guys get ur vote lol

I don’t own Shadowville

11:54 pm
April 21, 2008


bishnoo

Journeyman

Posts: 77

32

Tankscrapper:

multies - 3.5

punches - 3

personals - 3

vocab - 3

structure - 4.5

I liked both your verses, they worked very well, and you had some decent disses and whatnot in there, your 2nd verse was better than the first.

TOTAL: 17

 

Oreo

punches - 3

multies - 2

vocab - 2

personals - 2

structure - 2

Your first verse was decent, Pretty good, but the 2nd you were trying too hard and you came out with these long ass lines beside these itty bitty things and yeah, some of your lines could have easily been 2. Structure was terrible, no offense. You did manage to have some clever rhymes and punches though, work on that structure!

TOTAL: 11

You can-suck-a-fuckin-stick-a-dynamite, and-struck-the-fuckin-wick-a-light. It’ll hit you harder then-I-motherfuckin-hit-my-wife.

11:28 am
April 23, 2008


oreocookie

Initiate

Posts: 46

33

thanks for the advice. like i said before im more of a verbal guy and like dion freestyle battles against freinds. so its hard to understand my structure

4:21 pm
May 4, 2008


tankscraper

Journeyman

Posts: 84

34

Is there a time limit on this?… cuz i’d like to get some more battles going on and we can’t get a vote.  Maybe someone can be the coolest and close this ancient battle, i’m sure oreo agrees.

 

4:24 pm
May 4, 2008


king cobra

Posts: 2754

35

Go ahead…This has been on for a while….you guys can battle other people.

9:48 pm
May 4, 2008


tankscraper

Journeyman

Posts: 84

36

thanks