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12:49 am January 21, 2008
| kingofspadez
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Calypso - 18
Multis - 4
Punches - 2
Vocab - 5
Personals - 2
Structure - 5
Your Multis and Structure were great.Structure was easy to read and flowed nice.Your vocab was great.I thought your Personals and Punches really lacked though.Nothing really stood out and everything was on a below basic levle.Nothing was hilarious,Thats why i scored you low.If you had some better Punches and Personals,Then you would have taken it hands down.
States - 19
Multis - 3
Punches - 4
Vocab - 3
Personals - 4
Structure - 5
Your Multis and Vocab was basic,Nothing above average to make me give you a better score.Your Punches and Personals were great,I really liked em.Your Structure was great it was easy to read and flowed nice.You got this one States.
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Spadez - Friend,Battler,Serial Rapist
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3:47 am January 21, 2008
| Cal
Journeyman
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to be honest.. I agree with these votes.. I wasnt as personal as I should have been or could have been… but States ur prob gonna run away wit this one.. great battle homey mad props.. we gonna have to do this again sometime in the near future…
This was my fav line from ur drops:
"Calypso: Definition- to be a b*tch so, bad that you repulse others
Disgust others, to make it even worse it’s proven your Spadez brother
Which would make you the weakest of our species, please listen
What you and your dog do with ‘reeses’ peanut butter is your busines"
that was a hott ass ‘flippin’ punch haha
peace
Cal
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“You gon feel my rush, you don’t feel it then it must be too real to touch.”
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4:41 am January 21, 2008
| king cobra
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States is up 2 - 0. Keep voting!
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4:46 am January 21, 2008
| kingofspadez
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I wanna know why States is so obsessed with me.He mentions me in his battles all the time.
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Spadez - Friend,Battler,Serial Rapist
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12:34 pm January 21, 2008
| Shadow
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lol….this battle was actually pretty nice but i do believe calypso coulda came more dangerous like in the tag battle
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1:52 pm January 21, 2008
| Playboy
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Mista Spadez said:
I wanna know why States is so obsessed with me.He mentions me in his battles all the time.
uhhhh…. you’re my idol
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-”Believe” mixtape now available for free download. http://www.zshare.net/download/53742630a00b5250-
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2:22 pm January 21, 2008
| kingofspadez
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States i know i am a huge influence for you.
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Spadez - Friend,Battler,Serial Rapist
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5:04 pm January 21, 2008
| JaMiNo
Seasoned Veteran
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The States Son - 20
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Structure: 4
Multis: 3
Vocab: 3
Punches: 4
Personals: 4
Punches in the first verse were decent man, but the flips in the second verse took it for me, some good s**t. Work on your multis though dawg.
Cal - 18
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Structure: 4
Multis: 3
Vocab: 4
Punches: 3
Personals: 2
Ah Cal, this wasn’t one of your best. And I have to disagree with the other voters with your multis. The last verse you dropped was deceptive, but most of the rhymes were not multis. Conception//Contention for example is not a multiple rhyme - the prefixes AND the suffixes are the same, and most of the bars ended in a similar way. It’s like ending bars with the same word and calling it a rhyme. There WERE some decent multis in there though, so I’m still giving you a 3.
Far from awful, but we know you can do better than this homie.
States takes this.
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HoT oN THe BeaTS… LiKe HeaRTBuRN!
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1:12 am January 22, 2008
| Ja-Taa the Misfit
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Alright then, all the votes are in, here’s how it breaks down…
The States Son garnered 3 votes
Cal tragically received 0 votes
The States Son takes this battle with a clean sweep!
Great battle gentlemen, not to mention a VERY close one.
And thanks to all those who dropped their votes, keep it up.
Now that this battle is finished States, I do believe that you and me have a battle scheduled… so let’s get to it shall we.
And oh ya, the scoreboard has been updated.
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Electric arcs streak to restart ur deceased heart beat / That’s when I pull back the starched sheet so I can feast on the dark meat
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1:32 am February 1, 2008
| Hand.Selected.Saint
Fresh Meat
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"You gon feel my rush, you don’t feel it then it must be too real to touch." ok Eminem
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Absolute honor and courage comes fom within, it does not come from an outside influence
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