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The States Son vs Calypso

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12:49 am
January 21, 2008


kingofspadez

Seasoned Veteran

Posts: 560

11

Calypso - 18
Multis - 4
Punches - 2
Vocab - 5
Personals - 2
Structure - 5

Your Multis and Structure were great.Structure was easy to read and flowed nice.Your vocab was great.I thought your Personals and Punches really lacked though.Nothing really stood out and everything was on a below basic levle.Nothing was hilarious,Thats why i scored you low.If you had some better Punches and Personals,Then you would have taken it hands down.

States - 19
Multis - 3
Punches - 4
Vocab - 3
Personals - 4
Structure - 5

Your Multis and Vocab was basic,Nothing above average to make me give you a better score.Your Punches and Personals were great,I really liked em.Your Structure was great it was easy to read and flowed nice.You got this one States.

Spadez - Friend,Battler,Serial Rapist :)

3:47 am
January 21, 2008


Cal

Journeyman

Posts: 54

12

to be honest.. I agree with these votes.. I wasnt as personal as I should have been or could have been… but States ur prob gonna run away wit this one.. great battle homey mad props.. we gonna have to do this again sometime in the near future…

This was my fav line from ur drops:

"Calypso:  Definition- to be a b*tch so, bad that you repulse others
Disgust others, to make it even worse it’s proven your Spadez brother
Which would make you the weakest of our species, please listen
What you and your dog do with ‘reeses’ peanut butter is your busines"

 

that was a hott ass ‘flippin’ punch haha

 

peace

Cal

“You gon feel my rush, you don’t feel it then it must be too real to touch.”

4:41 am
January 21, 2008


king cobra

Posts: 2754

13

States is up 2 - 0. Keep voting!

4:46 am
January 21, 2008


kingofspadez

Seasoned Veteran

Posts: 560

14

I wanna know why States is so obsessed with me.He mentions me in his battles all the time.

Spadez - Friend,Battler,Serial Rapist :)

12:34 pm
January 21, 2008


Shadow

Posts: 5957

Somewhere near a bunch of beavers….

15

lol….this battle was actually pretty nice but i do believe calypso coulda came more dangerous like in the tag battle

I don’t own Shadowville

1:52 pm
January 21, 2008


Playboy

Seasoned Veteran

Posts: 860

16

Mista Spadez said:

I wanna know why States is so obsessed with me.He mentions me in his battles all the time.


uhhhh…. you’re my idol

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2:22 pm
January 21, 2008


kingofspadez

Seasoned Veteran

Posts: 560

17

States i know i am a huge influence for you.

Spadez - Friend,Battler,Serial Rapist :)

5:04 pm
January 21, 2008


JaMiNo

Seasoned Veteran

Posts: 836

ReiGNiNG TeXT-BaTTLe CHaMPioN

18

The States Son - 20
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Structure: 4
Multis: 3
Vocab: 3
Punches: 4
Personals: 4

Punches in the first verse were decent man, but the flips in the second verse took it for me, some good s**t.  Work on your multis though dawg.

Cal - 18
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Structure: 4
Multis: 3
Vocab: 4
Punches: 3
Personals: 2

Ah Cal, this wasn’t one of your best.  And I have to disagree with the other voters with your multis.  The last verse you dropped was deceptive, but most of the rhymes were not multis.  Conception//Contention for example is not a multiple rhyme - the prefixes AND the suffixes are the same, and most of the bars ended in a similar way.  It’s like ending bars with the same word and calling it a rhyme.  There WERE some decent multis in there though, so I’m still giving you a 3. 

Far from awful, but we know you can do better than this homie.

 

States takes this.

HoT oN THe BeaTS… LiKe HeaRTBuRN!

1:12 am
January 22, 2008


Ja-Taa the Misfit

Posts: 589

19

Alright then, all the votes are in, here’s how it breaks down…

 

The States Son garnered 3 votes

Cal tragically received 0 votes

 The States Son takes this battle with a clean sweep!

Great battle gentlemen, not to mention a VERY close one.

And thanks to all those who dropped their votes, keep it up.

 

Now that this battle is finished States, I do believe that you and me have a battle scheduled… so let’s get to it shall we.

And oh ya, the scoreboard has been updated.

Electric arcs streak to restart ur deceased heart beat / That’s when I pull back the starched sheet so I can feast on the dark meat

1:32 am
February 1, 2008


Hand.Selected.Saint

Fresh Meat

Posts: 2

20

  "You gon feel my rush, you don’t feel it then it must be too real to touch." ok Eminem

Absolute honor and courage comes fom within, it does not come from an outside influence