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11:05 pm
May 19, 2012
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Ja-Taa the Misfit
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Post edited 11:16 pm - May 19, 2012 by Ja-Taa the Misfit
It's disturbin to witness, but observe as the Misfit turns sadistic and verbally murders Trip 6
Afflict him with a nervous twitch, urgently jerkin six squirtin d**ks, while nursin his vertically slit wrists
Set it to music and call it The Return of Trip 6: The Jergens & Jizz Mix…on purchase before Christmas!
Sir, this wordsmith is in business, and you're bout to get CROSSED OUT like the world's first Christian
Your mom shoulda had an abortion and torched the foreskin…I know the b*tch had her doubts
I mean, she only gave birth to this poor kid so she could kick the BASTARD OUT
Bitch nearly passed out before slappin you in the mouth like wife-beatin crackers from the South
Trip, you shoulda backed out…cuz you couldn't “spit fresh s**t” on a castin couch doing ass-to-mouth!
You're a cannibal? How do ya plan to damage a man who's unmanageable and CAN'T be dismantled?
Even if you're channelin Hannibal, this Ja (jaw) can't be broken, sorta like adamantium mandibles
I'm half man/half animal, the embodiment of fight dogs 'n lynch mobs
Rippin more holes thru your f**kin “temples” than Neo-Nazi pipebombs in synagogues
So Trip, save the hijinks, I'll have this basic rhyme inked by the time the blade of my knife sinks
Faster than your eyes blink, folks'll be sayin your rhymes stink on your Facebook page hyperlink
This Canadian'll make your pride shrink, cuz trust me, I've seen hotter lines painted under ice rinks
So b*tch here's your rematch… now watch me ROLL 6 TWICE just like I got the dice rigged
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Electric arcs streak to restart ur deceased heart beat / That’s when I pull back the starched sheet so I can feast on the dark meat
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9:13 am
May 20, 2012
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Trip 6
Seasoned Veteran
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Yaaaaaaaawn! I just woke up and you're puttin' me back to sleep already, Ja. Haha. Nah man, on the real, both verses were tight as hell. Always a pleasure to battle you. I vote for OVERTIME!!!
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Don’t come close..I got issues..Kid, I put it down like a rabid pitbull.
Kinda like Stevie Wonder gettin’ dressed - you don’t have an idea what you’re gettin’ into
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1:10 pm
May 20, 2012
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Ja-Taa the Misfit
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Well, if OT is necessary we can always state the terms when (or if) that happens. In the meantime let's see if we can get enough people to vote on this… the winner will be the first to get 5 votes, preferably with some kind of basic breakdown from the judges. And I'll save my nice guy compliments until it's over and a winner has been declared. Cool? alright…
VOTING IS NOW OPEN.
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Electric arcs streak to restart ur deceased heart beat / That’s when I pull back the starched sheet so I can feast on the dark meat
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3:03 pm
May 20, 2012
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KoLyric
Master Shadowvillian
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Do a rematch with audio. lol.
Anyways, for round two my favorite lines:
Trip: “A cannibal's thirst, bring Hannibal's curse to life, ya bars are numbered like scannable merchandise
You wouldn't be hot rockin flannel ‘n thermal tights, jammed in a furnace like plans of the German reich”
“ She screamed unwillingly,hope you don't mind, I figured you'd be used to havin the weakest delivery”
“Accept the verdict -my art official like a clever wordsmith, you're artificial like an egg ‘n sperm dish”
“Ya know why? Cuz I put ya * when I run up and / your :”
Dope af!
Ja: “ Sir, this wordsmith is in business, and you're bout to get CROSSED OUT like the world's first Christian”
“Trip, you shoulda backed out…cuz you couldn't “spit fresh s**t” on a castin couch doing ass-to-mouth!”
“Even if you're channelin Hannibal, this Ja (jaw) can't be broken, sorta like adamantium mandibles”
“Rippin more holes thru your f**kin “temples” than Neo-Nazi pipebombs in synagogues”
“This Canadian'll make your pride shrink, cuz trust me, I've seen hotter lines painted under ice rinks
So b*tch here's your rematch… now watch me ROLL 6 TWICE just like I got the dice rigged” I think the best finisher. (Although I read it in your accent for that last line to sound better lmfao)
After numerous read-throughs, I'd have to give it to Ja-Taa.
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Withered Wallflower (Nothing is Sacred)
out now
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8:30 am
May 21, 2012
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Trip 6
Seasoned Veteran
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@ Ko- I appreciate you voting and reading through all our s**t, even though you're wrong. Haha. When I buy some audio equipment, I'll definitely start doing audio battles.
VOTING IS STILL OPEN
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Don’t come close..I got issues..Kid, I put it down like a rabid pitbull.
Kinda like Stevie Wonder gettin’ dressed - you don’t have an idea what you’re gettin’ into
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8:59 am
May 21, 2012
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turabo40
Master Shadowvillian
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Hard to choose, but ill give it to Jah
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10:49 am
May 21, 2012
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smiley_teletubbie
Veteran
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My vote goes to Trip 6.. Very close
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10:57 am
May 21, 2012
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WarLock
Veteran
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1. Multis - Tie I really think you both had a crazy amount of multi's lol
2. Punchlines - Trip. Both of you had a really good punches (this is a veteren battle, I'd be more surprised if you didn't have good ones) But I think Trip edged you out on this one Jaa
3. Vocabulary -Tie …Yeah I can't think of anything to write here
4. Personals- Trip. Again, just like the punches you both had amazingly clever verses
5. Structure- Tie. You both had great structure. Easy to read/understand and very enjoyable
Honestly this battle is as close to a tie as I think I'll ever find great read both of you!
Vote- Trip.
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“Lyricism is an art. Not just a bunch of words that rhyme.” Trip 6
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11:32 am
May 21, 2012
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KoLyric
Master Shadowvillian
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Trip 6 said:
@ Ko- I appreciate you voting and reading through all our s**t, even though you're wrong. Haha. When I buy some audio equipment, I'll definitely start doing audio battles.
VOTING IS STILL OPEN
LMAO
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Withered Wallflower (Nothing is Sacred)
out now
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12:18 pm
May 21, 2012
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casey jones
Journeyman
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s**t… uhhh idk man, this was seriously sick as f**k and so close to call. the easiest (and most benificial for the people reading and voting) is to say its a draw and go overtime. someone needs to edge out ahead more. thats what i think we all wanna see is more dope s**t like this cuz lets face it, this is a gem in a dog s**t of a battle forum.
but if i had to give a vote to one of u, i guess itd be trip. just seemed slightly more vicious
vote: Trip6
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this is where u put ur best lines and then people steal them, right?
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