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Young Boi Vs Bishnoo

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11:51 pm
May 6, 2008


youngboi

Initiate

Posts: 43

1

Ai Boy heres ma drop

 

your guna wana ‘run’ a ‘way’ so u should make like a model/
I came here to spread more blood than a Stephen King novel/                                                                          joining the church chior couldnt help pitch ur punches higher/
this kids ’styles messed up’ like ‘high intensity blow dryers’/
this crowd wont show u any support…u could be a strapless braw/
you’d think I ’stole the shark movie’ the way I’ll ‘rip your Jaw’/
this twats stupid, he probably wont even understand the lines I fed/
its clear bishnoos muslem…..cuz this Rap went over his head. (rap-wrap)
Bishnoo not a good Emcee thats why he dresses like toby keith/
u’ll never experience ‘wisdom’ cuz I’ll knock out your ‘teeth’/


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12:45 am
May 7, 2008


bishnoo

Journeyman

Posts: 77

2

Here ya are my man

 

Jeeze by the looks of that I’m just wasting-my-time

I’ll give ya some s**t to think about walkin back and forth pacing-a-line

While your scratching your head

Just trying to figure out what exactly was said.

So how many hours did your premade-verse-take?

Ill take your week long verse and cremate-thursday.

You better hope this don’t hurt too bad cause we-made-first-aid

And it’s not gonna help you, might as well go e-bay-word-play

And try and buy it or something cause you have-none

Your still just a baby rapper feeding off pablum

The only s**t you spit is into your recieving-blanket

Meanwhile I spit fire like an AK relieving-blank-tips.

And when you feel this s**t you better take-a-step-back

You’ve broken the rules after you’ve made-a-death-pact

So now It’s time to suffer-the-consiquence

I’ll let you off this time, but I’ve had enough-of-the-nonsence

 

Come back with somethin real nice!

You can-suck-a-fuckin-stick-a-dynamite, and-struck-the-fuckin-wick-a-light. It’ll hit you harder then-I-motherfuckin-hit-my-wife.

1:16 am
May 7, 2008


youngboi

Initiate

Posts: 43

3

imma rip u to shreds/
after i sever ya body den sevre ya head//
im thirteen serving dudes older then me/
cz im droppin boulders on yo shoulders and im totin the heat//
im beast and a lyrical assassin/
ya crtitcal im askin//
u the devils right hand man (give him hand jobs)
im the devils advocate and i masterd it//
so u stupid batsard clit/
get mass of clips//
u and singin go together like ass and hips/
gay stripper givin ass for tips//
im the grim reeper too and i came to take ur soul/
not wit my axe but wit the words i tote//
time for school get rhymes ready/
will im the champ cause my rhymes steady//
Fuck this guy, when he trys to talk his mouth stays still/
I don’t usually beat up on woman.. but in ur case i will//
You know what thay say "A good emcee will never slack/"
Your skillz are blank to the point and thats wat all ur verses lack//
Now if we were similes, we all know you’d get "Beat around the bush//"
Ya see, i’ve seen you before, and you just rhyme about self glory/
Im not gonna pull out the thesaurus on his ass,
cuz he’s used to Disney stories//

9:08 am
May 7, 2008


Shadow

Posts: 5958

Somewhere near a bunch of beavers….

4

i think i found someone whos structures worse than mine lol

I don’t own Shadowville

9:15 am
May 7, 2008


bishnoo

Journeyman

Posts: 77

5

Lol i just woke up, i dunno if its safe to write yet lmao, ill try though.

You can-suck-a-fuckin-stick-a-dynamite, and-struck-the-fuckin-wick-a-light. It’ll hit you harder then-I-motherfuckin-hit-my-wife.

9:27 am
May 7, 2008


bishnoo

Journeyman

Posts: 77

6

ya dude i can’t even think right now, im tired as hell, ill do this this afternoon. lol

You can-suck-a-fuckin-stick-a-dynamite, and-struck-the-fuckin-wick-a-light. It’ll hit you harder then-I-motherfuckin-hit-my-wife.

12:32 pm
May 7, 2008


tankscraper

Journeyman

Posts: 84

7

I wonder if that boi’s too yung to count to 16 lines.  Heh

3:05 pm
May 7, 2008


bishnoo

Journeyman

Posts: 77

8

Alright here ya go….

 

I warned-you-chump, that was just me warming-up

Now it’s time to wake the people up after your boring-stuff

I kinda feel bad for doing this to defile-you

I should probably get charged with child-abuse

But oh well i guess your gonna learn-it-the-hard-way

This isnt school kid, you made a wrong turn-at-the-park-way

So my advice is do a 180 and don’t ever return

Just take your "BITCH" sticker and pin it up on your t-shirt

Your disarmed and now your left-with-no-gun-to-defend

It’s gonna cost you your life, a more hefty-sum-to-expend

I’m just playin kid, I’ll only murder-your-ego

And no ones gonna save you, I put a curse-on-your-heros

You might do better if you came back in a few birthdays

And save your money from em so you can purchase that word-play

So just keep in mind how you ended up with the worst-fate

Cause it was your own damn fault in the first-place

 

 

I’m tired as balls, can’t sleep lately so sorry if that one sucked lmao.

You can-suck-a-fuckin-stick-a-dynamite, and-struck-the-fuckin-wick-a-light. It’ll hit you harder then-I-motherfuckin-hit-my-wife.

3:23 pm
May 7, 2008


bishnoo

Journeyman

Posts: 77

9

VOTES PLEASE.

You can-suck-a-fuckin-stick-a-dynamite, and-struck-the-fuckin-wick-a-light. It’ll hit you harder then-I-motherfuckin-hit-my-wife.

8:29 pm
May 7, 2008


kingrap223

Disciple

Posts: 23

10

youngboi 

structure - 2

vocab - 3

punches - 2

personals - 2

multies - 3
total:12

 

bishnoo

 structure - 4

vocab - 3

punches - 3

personals - 4

multies - 4
total:18


my vote is for bishnoo 

youngboi you need a lil more practice your ok for a 13 yr old jus practice more and then battle on the internet ok good luck man 

H.I.P. H.O.P. all day hit me up if u wanna know wat it stands 4