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Yung Beast vs. RS91

Closed Battle

UserPost

10:58 pm
April 30, 2009


rs91

Foot Soldier

READING, PA

posts 53

1

Post edited 11:12 pm - April 30, 2009 by rs91


Yung Beast, im hungry!

i eat you, like lunch meat!

you hopped on a dumb beat,

n' tried rappin like bun b

but take this one from me:

you're not me, you dummy.

ya rhymes are too crummy,

ugly, and scummy

im sorry it hurt,

but it coulda of been worse,

now get up off tha dirt,

and go find ya a verse.

haha get @ me.

myspace.com/youngvoice91


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11:02 pm
April 30, 2009


ehkho

Underboss

sd, california

posts 466

2

iight u can do ur 16 bars now.

im so fuckin disgusting fuckin diseases catch me,, swim thru ya respiratory, dance on ya nervous, and exit after the digesting,, (formerly Yung Beast; Record: 9-3)

1:52 am
May 1, 2009


rajzilla

Rookie

posts 8

3

rs91, that was WEAK. But good luck…

2:45 am
May 1, 2009


lgb504

Capo

504 now 214

posts 163

4

rajzilla said:

rs91, that was WEAK. But good luck…


dam zilla's first post was raw ass hell then wished him good luck

New Orleans to Dallas

4:28 pm
May 1, 2009


ehkho

Underboss

sd, california

posts 466

5

i try to rap like bun b? i kill u like pimp c..

rip you apart like raw meat, step on u like i got cleats..

r.i.p. pimp c, but this nigga like urkel is weak..

like we climbin mount everest u at the base im on the peak..

an now u gettin crushed, lyrically raped and beat..

let a real nigga rap, get off the stage and take a seat..

and after eleven posts this dude try an battle me..

u try to walk but can't, like kunta ill cut off ya feet..

like a landmine in vietnam ill take ya speech..

an readin mah verse is like acid ta ya eyes, rinse then weep..

ya rhymes are ugly like betty, lyrically fugly..

but ask ya girl last nite i had her screamin please fuck me..

ya lines sound hillbilly pretty country like huckabee..

ahh now the creature, the monster, Yung Beast is hungry..


im so fuckin disgusting fuckin diseases catch me,, swim thru ya respiratory, dance on ya nervous, and exit after the digesting,, (formerly Yung Beast; Record: 9-3)

5:22 pm
May 1, 2009


SUSPENDED

Kingpin

Ottawa Canada

posts 909

6

the way RS91 wrote his shit, its like 6 bars when you put 2 of them together to make one, cuz it doesnt go on a beat unless the beat is a techno one , you know what i meen…


so beast had 14 bars and RS91 had 6 if where talking about lyrics for rap like i was saying before…  beast had punchlines on every bar, and RS91 had his shit sounding like it was top of the head and no structure and there was no beat to hop on like when he said : you hopped on a dumb beat …. its a TEXT BATTLE ….  RS91, your gonna need some structure, some complexity in what your writing, that will make it more insteresting and next thing to do is work a lot on punchlines and your verse sounded like words that rhyme and that can diss someone, but it wasnt good and Beast won with all the categorys people can vote on   


1 for Yung Beast , 0 for RS91

AGENT AHLEX said : You must’ve not seen any of my past posts or talked to Cobra? lol I’m pretty twisted for a nerd living in the suburbs… ……the first step to recovery is admitting you have a problem

5:25 pm
May 1, 2009


SUSPENDED

Kingpin

Ottawa Canada

posts 909

7

young beast, that was a nice flip of his bun b line, when you talked about pimp c, …. he died from weighin too much or from eating too much bad food, you could of said : I MAKE YOU DIE LIKE PIMP C, but I KILL YOU LIKE PIMP C , still works good,…. im gonna have to battle you when you get your microphone

AGENT AHLEX said : You must’ve not seen any of my past posts or talked to Cobra? lol I’m pretty twisted for a nerd living in the suburbs… ……the first step to recovery is admitting you have a problem

5:37 pm
May 1, 2009


ehkho

Underboss

sd, california

posts 466

8

thx for tha feedback dawg.

im so fuckin disgusting fuckin diseases catch me,, swim thru ya respiratory, dance on ya nervous, and exit after the digesting,, (formerly Yung Beast; Record: 9-3)

5:45 pm
May 1, 2009


SUSPENDED

Kingpin

Ottawa Canada

posts 909

9

if you wanna battle someone else you can now, the votes are not done, but everyone is gonna vote for you

AGENT AHLEX said : You must’ve not seen any of my past posts or talked to Cobra? lol I’m pretty twisted for a nerd living in the suburbs… ……the first step to recovery is admitting you have a problem

5:46 pm
May 1, 2009


ehkho

Underboss

sd, california

posts 466

10

iight koo.

im redy to battle wenever, anybody who mite wanna txt battle me.

im so fuckin disgusting fuckin diseases catch me,, swim thru ya respiratory, dance on ya nervous, and exit after the digesting,, (formerly Yung Beast; Record: 9-3)