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Yung Tech Vs 24 Karat

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7:22 pm
March 4, 2008


Mr Amazin AkA LimitLESS

Journeyman

Posts: 90

1

im laughin, so crazy like hystarics,

at this b*tch ass kid named 24 karats,

i dont even need to hear ya verse cuz for u im embarassed,

like a BAR exam this a test,

and im sure youll bomb like a terrorist,

to hell with this and off to another subject,

its peaked my interest as to how you got the name twenty 4,

surely not like gold or diamonds thats shinin’,

cuz you just counldnt be more then lame your a bore,

time to step back and get a lil bit aggressive,

i dont give any warning im sending a direct message,

and heres incentive, count your blessin’s,

imma teach you a lesson of sorts,

the only karats you know can be found in the grocery store,

like scarface check under your car car there a case of C4,

explodin blowin your lame fagget ass out the door,


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7:34 pm
March 4, 2008


24-Karat

Initiate

Posts: 25

2

Aight, here I go, how I’ll do, nobody knows

I know dat I’m new at this, why you be talking s**t

Little man do you really know how to spit

Alright, I admit it, I’m white, I’m a cracker

I’ll even admit I’m a slacker

But seriously tech what you done with your life

Have you even met ya future wife

That verse is as dull as my swiss army knife

Look at me son, I’m 24 Karats of gold

And I’m only 17-years old

Now be quiet I’ma scold you

Get away from that compuetr I told you

To go bed stop talking about eating lead

Don’t let that s**t get to yo head

People ask me which way I’m goin’

This way, that way, switch me, bite me

Every kid swears when their parents ain’t around….it’s the fucking truth.

7:37 pm
March 4, 2008


righteous508

Disciple

Posts: 21

WORCESTER,MURDA MASS

3

Tech i think it was pretty dope reading,but id much rather here it over a beat and recorded…24…you cant be serious………..www.myspace.com/righteous508 get at me for anything collabs w/e!

8:03 pm
March 4, 2008


24-Karat

Initiate

Posts: 25

4

Aight I’m gonna try to be tha saviour

Put the odds in mah favor

I’m comin’ back, I don’t give a s**t if you call me whack

I’m clean, I don’t sit around smokin’ crack

Now listen to dis I’m tryna get on the map

Tech don’t get mad, don’t pop that cap

The only accomplished you made was sittin’ on Santa’s lap

But look what I did, I made Kurt Angle tap

Look 24 you suck at rhymes

I don’t give a s**t, have you ever killed a mime

He had it comin’, that b*tch couldn’t rhyme

That’s why I went and comitted dat crime

I try to flow, real fast and real slow

If you can’t do dat pack yo bags and hit the do’

Whatcha gonna do to the big 2 fo’

Every kid swears when their parents ain’t around….it’s the fucking truth.

8:11 pm
March 4, 2008


Mr Amazin AkA LimitLESS

Journeyman

Posts: 90

5

ey karat, i read ya lines,

now tell me y the hell did u subcribe to shadowville,

your lines are literally sick they makin me ill,

somebody quick, run to the pharmacy please i need advil,

you a retarted baby playin wit blocks, cant even stack well,

f**k around knock you out now wake up and smell the maxwell,

24 karat turn into nickle plated s**t wen i spit madd shells,

imma cut my verse in half cuz i know i wipped u out,

wen you get a losing tally on the score board, then u can pout,

but for now its time to man up,

so please remain seated while all the straight dudes stand up,

8:12 pm
March 4, 2008


24-Karat

Initiate

Posts: 25

6

Shit I suck

Every kid swears when their parents ain’t around….it’s the fucking truth.

10:28 pm
March 4, 2008


ッMock-Cッ

Shadowvillian

Posts: 2002

Home Town Columbus.Ohio

7

lol

dude you don’t suck

you’ll get there eventually 

Play League Of Legends with me http://signup.leagueoflegends.com/?ref=4d8b8a7d5c219203086186

12:22 am
March 5, 2008


Stakks

Fresh Meat

Posts: 5

8

I vote Yung Tech, Get this kid in maintstream

Stakks The Kid

8:31 am
March 5, 2008


Dezi

Master Shadowvillian

Posts: 4044

Digital Velocity

9

24Karat said:

Shit I suck



s**t atleast ur not like joey no money. so yeah like HY said, keep working… and yungtech you had some nice s**t.

9:23 am
March 5, 2008


Dezi

Master Shadowvillian

Posts: 4044

Digital Velocity

10

yungtech= 15

structure- 3

vocab-3

personals-3

punches-3

multis-3

 

feelin ur second verse more then the first… overall good job…

 24k= 10

structure- 3

vocab-3

personals-1

punches-2

multis-1

just keep at it…