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Zimri vs. Teletubbie

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5:54 pm
November 24, 2008


Smiley_Teletubbie

Capo

posts 171

11

ohh fok im still in battle… my  bad i'll post as soon as possible Smile

7:13 pm
November 24, 2008


Smiley_Teletubbie

Capo

posts 171

12

You beating me is as ridiculous as a paraplegic setting to run/

Might as well go on a journey to find yourself an atheist nun/

Teletubbie lives at home and weighs a ton, who will not hesitate to put his meat in the bun/

Truth is you’re my son, but raping you just aint fun/

This battle got me bored, with zimri rapping even a meal he couldn’t afford/

So now lets pray to the lord, as we eat from zimris fat that he has stored/

I aint gambiling, when im battling, I hit the hole 100% of the time like im crapping/

And see these bling- bling, I thank all my fans that are clapping/

Girls you just cant pleasure, cuz your penus just wont measure/

Let me take off the pressure, so I help and give them my cock-brochure/

Soon this battle will be history, and hopefully also your pants that are wore too tightly/

I impress, the one and only rapping teletubbie/

I been seeing with one hand on my eye, reality is we’re all gonna die/

So tell your girl your last, good-bye/

People gotta stop hating, cuz im gonna be staying/

Go ahead and start critizing, I do it for me,I look at my lyrics and alone I start laughing/

8:13 pm
November 24, 2008


Smiley_Teletubbie

Capo

posts 171

13

All right people plz vote

8:40 pm
November 24, 2008


Spadez

Kingpin

Pennsylvania - USA

posts 587

14

Zimri - 9
Multis - 3
Vocab - 3
Structure - 1
Personals - 1
Punches - 1

you have good multis and vocab.your second 16 sort of killed your vocab but it was still descent so i gave you the 3.structure was all over the place and there was no steady lines.you had weak personals and punches,if they were some-what funny i would have given you a 2.just keep working on it and youll get better.

Teletubbie - 8
Multis - 2
Vocab - 2
Structure - 2
Personals - 1
Punches - 1

i liked how you turned his Picasso line against him.you would have gotten a better score but your first 16 were bad but you rushed it so i understand.remember you got 48 hours dude so use em.

to me,its gonna be a close battle cause you guys didnt have good Personals or Punches.so its gonna come down to Multis,Vocab,and Structure.

9:15 pm
November 24, 2008


Smiley_Teletubbie

Capo

posts 171

15

Ur banned… ur vote doesnt count. I think Spadez doesnt know how to criticize a battle. How do I know that? Cuz he himself cant battle.  So plz Spades no offence, but if you dont know how to do something or understand it… dont criticize it. Long story short- Everyone can vote but you

9:20 pm
November 24, 2008


Smiley_Teletubbie

Capo

posts 171

16

And most of the time you vote against me.. its some ridiculous excuse, but then it turns out being you.

9:29 pm
November 24, 2008


Smiley_Teletubbie

Capo

posts 171

17

1)Zimri you’re the real trans here, but I’ll keep it on the low-low/

You aint a painter, but you go as the street name Pick-Ass-o/

2)I put work on the messages that I send, this a new generation, as an MC it’s the end/

I’ve always been the cool kid, but I cant seem to keep up on this “wack rapper trend”/

3)You know what’s funny, that you said you were making money/

Its just contradictory, just like saying I didn’t fuck your girl, the pink teletubbie/

4)You beating me is as ridiculous as a paraplegic setting to run/

Might as well go on a journey to find yourself an atheist nun/

5)This battle got me bored, with zimri rapping even a meal he couldn’t afford/

So now lets pray to the lord, as we eat from zimris fat that he has stored/

Ok so if those lines up there arent punchlines (maybe not the best), then wtf is

9:31 pm
November 24, 2008


Spadez

Kingpin

Pennsylvania - USA

posts 587

18

Smiley_Teletubbie said:

Ur banned… ur vote doesnt count. I think Spadez doesnt know how to criticize a battle. How do I know that? Cuz he himself cant battle.  So plz Spades no offence, but if you dont know how to do something or understand it… dont criticize it. Long story short- Everyone can vote but you


if i was banned i wouldnt be here,i WAS banned but not now so it does count.its not my fault that you cant write lol.and i have battled now against flash,i posted my 32 and im waiting for flash to post his last.worked out a new style so its all good.i do vote for you some times,dont be bitching if you get a vote against you.you know if it was Shadow or Cobra then you wouldnt mind it.you just single me out cause you hate me,so deal with it.

9:40 pm
November 24, 2008


Smiley_Teletubbie

Capo

posts 171

19

So lets make this clear… Cuz i have not once voted for you and will never vote for you, vice versa. Plz never vote for my battles again. This shit just turns childish. So from this day on, since you've been doing this shit for a while now and it wont stop. You wont get my support nor critizism/votes. And I expect for you to do the same.

9:44 pm
November 24, 2008


Smiley_Teletubbie

Capo

posts 171

20

For most people that dont know whats going on. I voted for someone who was not spadez, when he was battling a while bak. I had a battle at the same time, so he voted against me. He has voted against me since then… and not to be harsh on the boy, but if it comes to a close battle since Spades is always voting against me it would mean that the other person will only need 2 votes.

 
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