Damn, the Jam Man gonna get the ball rollin’
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Zinn The Criminal - 22
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Structure: 4
Multis: 4
Vocab: 4
Punches: 5
Personals: 5
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Punches and personals were at hot as ever. There aitn much to comment on, there’s not much advice I can give you. Just your first verse wasn’t a hot as your usual material. And to say you don’t rate multies so highly, they were still pretty damn good.
Here’s my favys:
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So this minimal nerd thinks his words more inclined??/
Leave his girls legs cocked like a Jordan Sign!/
This whore is blind, we know he’s simply queer/
That’s y I stopped "fuckin wit JT" like ‘Brintney Spears’!!!/
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Hot man. Just hot.
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but check-the-manifesto got you nervous-slammin-pepto/
so i hope ur ready to ‘take more shots’ than a ‘camera-klepto’/
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Hahaha!
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i’m detrimental in text plus my audio talents-lurk/
and both have a ‘delivery thats def’ like Hellen Keller’s-birth/
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Clever punch
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There were more man, but i’m at work and aint got much time.
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Ja Taa The Misfit - 24
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Structure: 4
Multis: 5
Vocab: 5
Punches: 5
Personals: 5
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I looked at this vote and thought that I must have rated you wrong somewhere, but damn - I didn’t. You knew you had hot competition and damn, you took it to him. Punches, Personals, Vocabs, Multies, they were all fuckign off the chain.
My favs:
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But I ain’t humane, I’ma kick ur ass and watch ya squat sobbin in the corner
Then burn the City of Zinn(Sin) to ash… like God to Sodom & Gemorrah
Drop ur body off at the coroner, prep ‘n dissect ur spinal discs by hand
Now you ain’t "FL1PPN 0UT", ur FL0PPIN 0UT, like epileptic fish on dry land
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Zinn/Sin, whatever it’s fucking similar and these bars were hot!
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Now let’s be plain and honest… cuz here’s some news that’ll raise brows
Our boy Zinn uses FAKE ACCOUNTS to lure kids to boost his play count!!!
Dude, aren’t you ashamed now? the day’s come that we learn the truth
And you can try ‘n play it down… but The State’s Son will confirm it’s true!!
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If this aint personal, then DAMN, I don’t know what is!
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I can’t recapture a reminiscence of when I witnessed a sadder bitch fit
Strap on a tampax Zinn, ur gettin B-10(beaten) like I sunk ur battleship kid
To bad this nitwit’s scared to admit I just blew the whistle on his bizness
Even if u had ‘BALLs L1K3 M3‘ u still couldn’t ‘test-to-kill’(testicle) the Misfit!
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LMAO
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Now listen you fuckin bitch, my style’s original ya cocky whinin retard
Now I wish I had a nickel for every "Criminal" I left rottin ‘behind these bars’
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Again there were more, but no time.
Misfit takes this.