ZINN - 22.5
punches - 5
personlas - 3.5
multis - 4
structure - 5
vocab - 5
Favorite Lines:
"but i was there the day ur mom complained condoms were too expensive" nice
"when you spend half of your lines rhyming & the other half to explain em!" lol
So The Only Way That ‘U.R.L.,Evading’ is by avoiding the address-of-this-website!!" nice
"so i hope ur ready to ‘take more shots’ than a ‘camera-klepto’" nice
"got you at gunpoint with your ‘hands up’ like over-achieving students!!" I cant put my finger on it, but i do believe I’ve heard this line (or something similar) before. But I like it, either way
Tight work all in all. I dont know why u started admitting defeat before it was over like that, ur shit wasnt that bad, and everyone that read ur verses, knows it. The lowest score I gave u was in personals. u had some good ones in there and u had real good punches, but they could be recycled on anyone and to me, it made ur verse seem a tiny bit generic. And despite what u said in some earlier posts about Ja’s style lackin punches and having too many multis, i disagree. I think his hit just as hard, its just the way they were born from personals, set up & strung together gave him some extra ‘oomph.’ But by no means am I saying u didnt do a good job, I just think he did slightly better (as indicated by my scoring), so dont take anything I say as an insult, its just my opinion.
JA TAA - 24
punches - 4
personlas - 5
multis - 5
structure - 5
vocab - 5
Favorite Lines:
"Then burn the City of Zinn(Sin) to ash… like God to Sodom & Gemorrah" nice
"So after this skirmish is thru… Zinn will ‘not see(Nazi) salutes‘ like German platoons!" very nice
"Strap on a tampax Zinn, ur gettin B-10(beaten) like I sunk ur battleship kid" very nice
"Even if u had ‘BALLs L1K3 M3‘ u still couldn’t ‘test-to-kill’(testicle) the Misfit!" nice
"It’s true he "seeps-pollutants",like leaky dixie cups(dicks he cups)on his lips" lol
"Now I wish I had a nickel for every "Criminal" I left rottin ‘behind these bars’" VERY nice
"I wrecked ur rep in text… and folks lost their heads like Marie Antoinette!" nice
Great wordplay, personals & mix of multis & punches. I think u r definitely the best text battler on this site. I’ll even admit that this is one of those match ups I was interested in seeing. The only negative thing I can really say is that while ur style of wordplay (ex. Dixie cups/Dicks he cups) is def dope, it may be hard for some people to catch or may not pack the same punch, if translated to audio.
There’s really no advice some us can give, this was a bout between 2 skilled individuals in their own respect. And its good to see there’s no hard feelings after all is said and done. A battle is so much better when the contestants can still walk away as friends and at peace with eachother while learning something from every endeavor.
nice battle guys
ps. sorry for the novel
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