Fix your mixing, it's hard to hear the verse. That said, the lyrics/rhyme scheme are really below average. The adlibs are WAY to loud. The flow is okay, it's a little basic but it's not bad. The delivery is also boring, you need to act like you care about what your saying, otherwise no one else will.

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